This ain't bad actually. I just wish there was more of it...maybe a lil sound?
You should keep at it even if it gets blammed! It's a nice start of something.
I like the style of the characters in the beginning. I wish more of it was in that style... (I also just wish there was more actual animation.)
The frames stay up waaaaay too long. No one needs 30 seconds+ to read "The British Shorthair Cat Hookah"
Yes, I know about that. I realised that would be annoying to some people shortly after I uploaded it. Sorry about that. Thank you for the review, though!
Everything about this is fucking great.
The action? RAD.
The smear frames? Rad.
The music? SO, SO RAD
I love this.
I think this is a pretty good first attempt. I liked the joke at end!
A few suggestions/comments are:
The beginning shot is a little long. The stick figure just walks across the screen—It's boring. I'd make that shot shorter or add something into the shot to make it less monotonous.
The audio for the car comes way too early.
I don't think the 6 sec credits are necessary on a piece this short. I'd just sign it in the corner.
This had a solid set up—I hope you keep at it.
Thanks a lot, AchromaticHue. I will definitely work on the things you have mentioned and try to do better.
i wish that harambe memes would make like harambe and just die already
Just a technical note: Brian's voice is kind of quiet, esp in comparison to the other dog. it'd be worth it to go back and even that out a bit
You should resubmit this as a gif to the art portal! It's actually pretty cool—this just ain't the place for it
Oh gotcha! Thanks!
....Why are you reuploading tho?
"HD" Remasters. They take days to fix, but it's worth it! People on Youtube stole my animations around 2008 and slapped their names over it and got millions of views. So hopefully this helps me. I already got tons of people saying "YOU MADE THAT?!". So that's a good sign lol
I think it's good–just real short.
If it gets blammed, submit it as a gif to the art portal. I think it would fit there better.
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