wermking's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death Wish]

I like it, though it doesn't seem like she has a death wish. (I am sorry you did before XD)

The guns and anatomy in general are well drawn and nicely modeled. I like how you suggested a background and foreground.

Something is strange about her face though. If you saw her mouth from that view, I don't think you'd see so much of the eye or viceversa.

Good work

AkiCarlito responds:

Thank you very much for the feedback! :D its much appreciated!!
and hmm now that u mention it, i suppose so :) thank you again

[The Descent of Man pg2]

I saw this and page 4. The art is great, but the way that the text is placed and the font itself could use some work.

(Comic sans? really?)

Sevens responds:

lol I was rushing myself to get this out, so I didn't take the time to make the word bubbles,
yeah Comic sans.... but hey it's readable right? thanks for the input, I'll be sure to keep the word bubbles.