This was really cool! It could be cleaner, but the movements are on point and the colors you chose are super interesting. The animation has a lot of great energy, too...There's a lot of great stuff here.
Welcome to Newgrounds! Just fyi, there's a high possibility that this video's gonna get blammed, 'cause Ng has an audio portal—in the future you should submit your music there! :o
This ain't bad actually. I just wish there was more of it...maybe a lil sound?
You should keep at it even if it gets blammed! It's a nice start of something.
I like the style of the characters in the beginning. I wish more of it was in that style... (I also just wish there was more actual animation.)
The frames stay up waaaaay too long. No one needs 30 seconds+ to read "The British Shorthair Cat Hookah"
Yes, I know about that. I realised that would be annoying to some people shortly after I uploaded it. Sorry about that. Thank you for the review, though!
Everything about this is fucking great.
The action? RAD.
The smear frames? Rad.
The music? SO, SO RAD
I love this.
I think this is a pretty good first attempt. I liked the joke at end!
A few suggestions/comments are:
The beginning shot is a little long. The stick figure just walks across the screen—It's boring. I'd make that shot shorter or add something into the shot to make it less monotonous.
The audio for the car comes way too early.
I don't think the 6 sec credits are necessary on a piece this short. I'd just sign it in the corner.
This had a solid set up—I hope you keep at it.
Thanks a lot, AchromaticHue. I will definitely work on the things you have mentioned and try to do better.
i wish that harambe memes would make like harambe and just die already
Just a technical note: Brian's voice is kind of quiet, esp in comparison to the other dog. it'd be worth it to go back and even that out a bit
You should resubmit this as a gif to the art portal! It's actually pretty cool—this just ain't the place for it
Oh gotcha! Thanks!
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